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Until the day when Bhrenor died.
Until the day when Bhrenor died.




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Without the gift of Bhrenor's breath
Without the gift of Bhrenor's breath




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Calamity was all they knew
Calamity was all they knew




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Spilling all their vital breath
Spilling all their vital breath




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Little things, like mice and men
Little things, like mice and men


Weaker than the Titans then
Weaker than their makers then
 




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And even ancients can be killed.
And even ancients can be killed.




Now the age of men's begun
Now the age of men's begun


And our Calamity is done
Calamity is done, become


As brother Bhrenor was, become
As brother Bhrenor was before


Humanity, thy time has come!</blockquote>
Humanity, Excelsior!</blockquote>


== See also ==
== See also ==

Revision as of 22:41, 1 September 2026

This page proposes a creation account for the world, the event of which is commonly known as The First Breath, Bhrenor's First Breath, Bhrenor's Last Breath, or just The Breath.

The tale

Nothing is truly known about the First Breath, when exactly it occurred, who Bhrenor was, how he died or why it happened. However, the basic facts held to be true by most inhabitants of Ard are evident from the commonly recited classic poem Excelsior, attributed to an unnamed saint of the Church of the First Breath:

Legends say when Ard was new

Rivers ran to oceans blue,

But nothing lived.

And nothing cried

Until the day when Bhrenor died.


The stone, the sea, the wind, the flame

They all must know, and speak his name

There is no life, there is no death

Without the gift of Bhrenor's breath


For he awoke the titans four

Aora, Stend, Hehter, Equor

Strong they stood, the mighty few

Calamity was all they knew


Their struggle shook, and shaped the world

With every bolt and stone they hurled

Bringing them untimely death

Spilling all their vital breath


Where it collected, life ensued

Seed and sinew, soil imbued

Little things, like mice and men

Weaker than their makers then


Living, breathing, flesh and blood

Growing like a rose's bud

Mice are small, but many still

And even ancients can be killed.


Now the age of men's begun

Calamity is done, become

As brother Bhrenor was before

Humanity, Excelsior!

See also