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== The tale ==
== The tale ==
Nothing is truly known about the First Breath, when exactly it occurred, who Bhrenor was, how he died or why it happened. However, the basic facts held to be true by most inhabitants of Ard are evident from the commonly recited classic poem ''Excelsior'', attributed to an unnamed saint of the [[Church of the First Breath]]:<blockquote>  Legends say when Ard was new
Nothing is truly known about the First Breath, when exactly it occurred, who Bhrenor was, how he died or why it happened. However, the basic facts held to be true by most inhabitants of Ard are evident from the commonly recited classic poem ''Excelsior'', attributed to an unnamed saint of the [[Church of the First Breath]]:<blockquote>Legends say when Ard was new


  Rivers ran to oceans blue,
Rivers ran to oceans blue,


  But nothing lived.
But nothing lived.


  And nothing cried
And nothing cried


  Until the day when Bhrenor died.
Until the day when Bhrenor died.
  The stone, the sea, the wind, the flame


  The stone, the sea, the wind, the flame


  They all must know, and speak his name
The stone, the sea, the wind, the flame


  There is no life, there is no death
They all must know, and speak his name


  Without the gift of Bhrenor's breath
There is no life, there is no death
  For he awoke the titans four


  For he awoke the titans four
Without the gift of Bhrenor's breath


  Aora, Stend, Hehter, Equor


  Strong they stood, the mighty few
For he awoke the titans four


  Calamity was all they knew
Aora, Stend, Hehter, Equor
  Their struggle shook, and shaped the world


  Their struggle shook, and shaped the world
Strong they stood, the mighty few


  With every bolt and stone they hurled
Calamity was all they knew


  Bringing them untimely death


  Spilling all their vital breath
Their struggle shook, and shaped the world
  Where it collected, life ensued


  Where it collected, life ensued
With every bolt and stone they hurled


  Seed and sinew, soil imbued
Bringing them untimely death


  Little things, like mice and men
Spilling all their vital breath


  Weaker than the titans then
  Living, breathing, flesh and blood


  Living, breathing, flesh and blood
Where it collected, life ensued


  Growing like a rose's bud
Seed and sinew, soil imbued


  Mice are small, but many still
Little things, like mice and men


  And even ancients can be killed.
Weaker than the Titans then
  Now the age of men's begun


  Now the age of men's begun


  And our Calamity is done
Living, breathing, flesh and blood


  As brother Bhrenor was, become
Growing like a rose's bud


  Humanity, thy time has come!</blockquote>
Mice are small, but many still
 
And even ancients can be killed.
 
 
Now the age of men's begun
 
And our Calamity is done
 
As brother Bhrenor was, become
 
Humanity, thy time has come!</blockquote>


== See also ==
== See also ==

Revision as of 10:38, 18 August 2026

This page proposes a creation account for the world, the event of which is commonly known as The First Breath, Bhrenor's First Breath, Bhrenor's Last Breath, or just The Breath.

The tale

Nothing is truly known about the First Breath, when exactly it occurred, who Bhrenor was, how he died or why it happened. However, the basic facts held to be true by most inhabitants of Ard are evident from the commonly recited classic poem Excelsior, attributed to an unnamed saint of the Church of the First Breath:

Legends say when Ard was new

Rivers ran to oceans blue,

But nothing lived.

And nothing cried

Until the day when Bhrenor died.


The stone, the sea, the wind, the flame

They all must know, and speak his name

There is no life, there is no death

Without the gift of Bhrenor's breath


For he awoke the titans four

Aora, Stend, Hehter, Equor

Strong they stood, the mighty few

Calamity was all they knew


Their struggle shook, and shaped the world

With every bolt and stone they hurled

Bringing them untimely death

Spilling all their vital breath


Where it collected, life ensued

Seed and sinew, soil imbued

Little things, like mice and men

Weaker than the Titans then


Living, breathing, flesh and blood

Growing like a rose's bud

Mice are small, but many still

And even ancients can be killed.


Now the age of men's begun

And our Calamity is done

As brother Bhrenor was, become

Humanity, thy time has come!

See also